tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552083088916942937.post9121761843319573386..comments2023-12-13T03:19:15.138-08:00Comments on The Drift Record : A Second Poetry Friday Post TodayUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552083088916942937.post-89417996861318992642008-11-24T23:46:00.000-08:002008-11-24T23:46:00.000-08:00This is excellent, a list poem that feels like rea...This is excellent, a list poem that feels like real poetry!Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552083088916942937.post-78217595055536497922008-11-22T21:07:00.000-08:002008-11-22T21:07:00.000-08:00Thank you, all! If you work with a writing group, ...Thank you, all! If you work with a writing group, just give this exercise a try - it's so much fun to see what everyone comes up with, given the same end rhymes. If you know six people, each person can put in one rhyme (like stress/obsess) which leaves one last pair of words that can be wild cards. You end up with 14 words and then it's up to you - Elizabethan, Petrachan, whatever order you like. <BR/><BR/>I'm definitely going to try to Stretch on Mondays, Elaine.Julie https://www.blogger.com/profile/12811523890920763782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552083088916942937.post-27779492931612976872008-11-22T07:35:00.000-08:002008-11-22T07:35:00.000-08:00Julie,Great poem! I hope you'll join us in a Poetr...Julie,<BR/><BR/>Great poem! I hope you'll join us in a Poetry Stretch again!Elaine Magliarohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09829330276633865868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552083088916942937.post-72817831698623099792008-11-22T06:22:00.000-08:002008-11-22T06:22:00.000-08:00I'm so glad you joined us with this fabulous poem!...I'm so glad you joined us with this fabulous poem! I really love the last line - it draws me further on. You really did a great job with the rhymes too.Andromeda Jazmonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12355192738014962965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552083088916942937.post-42366394067456161592008-11-21T19:23:00.000-08:002008-11-21T19:23:00.000-08:00Hi, Julie. This is wonderful. You're quite amazi...Hi, Julie. This is wonderful. You're quite amazing. :-) My favorite line? The one about the -ifuls!! Very clever.diannewriteshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18275009560340127068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552083088916942937.post-4006986822280454202008-11-21T14:59:00.000-08:002008-11-21T14:59:00.000-08:00That is amazing! Makes me feel like doing somethin...That is amazing! Makes me feel like doing something too--and I'm no poet.Yat-Yeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04028075516122778317noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552083088916942937.post-14452976811644128512008-11-21T14:08:00.000-08:002008-11-21T14:08:00.000-08:00Mondays sound like a very good day to stretch! Wil...Mondays sound like a very good day to stretch! Will do.Julie https://www.blogger.com/profile/12811523890920763782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552083088916942937.post-84023381973258000112008-11-21T13:41:00.000-08:002008-11-21T13:41:00.000-08:00I can't believe you wrote this as a bouts rimés! I...I can't believe you wrote this as a bouts rimés! It certainly fits the list format! Thank you so much for sharing it. <BR/><BR/>BTW - We stretch every Monday if you feel like joining us again.Triciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18350907653629775293noreply@blogger.com