tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552083088916942937.post974218122578672495..comments2023-12-13T03:19:15.138-08:00Comments on The Drift Record : POETRY FRIDAY: A VILLANELLEUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552083088916942937.post-78630582303226965572010-06-04T20:09:14.463-07:002010-06-04T20:09:14.463-07:00...like a maze of feelings and words, thank you, J......like a maze of feelings and words, thank you, Julie, my head and heart do say, Nancy Bo Flood<br />(I'm back from Saipan today!)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552083088916942937.post-34114061171724457812010-05-29T09:49:48.127-07:002010-05-29T09:49:48.127-07:00I'm sure Heart is proud of Head, who has tied ...I'm sure Heart is proud of Head, who has tied it all up, cleverly and feelingly. Very nice!<br /><br />Violet<br />(http://vnesdolypoems.wordpress.com)Violet N.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16586574800230604652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552083088916942937.post-43046486823234460282010-05-29T07:44:10.700-07:002010-05-29T07:44:10.700-07:00Excellent, Julie!
"This is the way Head pla...Excellent, Julie! <br /><br />"This is the way Head plays<br /><br />with me,"<br /><br />Love that surprise turn of phrase. Thanks!<br /><br />Laura Evans<br />all things poetryLaurahttp://www.teachpoetryk12.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552083088916942937.post-84553119090643812502010-05-28T08:07:32.341-07:002010-05-28T08:07:32.341-07:00Bravo! Love it, Julie :). Especially heart whisper...Bravo! Love it, Julie :). Especially heart whispering at the end.jamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07859083373087448194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552083088916942937.post-27904079827276995452010-05-28T05:00:29.656-07:002010-05-28T05:00:29.656-07:00Oh, yes. Me, heart, head...I've been there. Al...Oh, yes. Me, heart, head...I've been there. Also, the whole "do the opposite of what is asked." Rules tend to make me clever. Maybe I should just submit to them with my heart.<br /><br />Anyhow, this villanelle is now one of my touchstones.Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12225998457253574928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552083088916942937.post-865444710871166842010-05-28T04:27:53.863-07:002010-05-28T04:27:53.863-07:00Great job!
"Incantatory" is exactly the...Great job!<br /><br />"Incantatory" is exactly the right word for the way a villanelle is.Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12463332371535167975noreply@blogger.com