The poem I’m posting for today's Poetry Friday is pure Mary Oliver. Along with Kay Ryan, Oliver is the poet whose work I hope children learn to love as they become young adults, and I've chosen “When I Am Among the Trees” because it does what a poem does best:
- Takes something ordinary and makes it extraordinary
- Starts exactly where it should, with real-world details rather than abstractions, by naming the specific trees - willows, honey locusts, beeches, oaks pine
- Has the courage to be full-hearted and to address life’s large complications.
Some of the walks will begin at lunch time, because I love to see the kids at Columbia Elementary - just around the block from our house - racing around full of the dickens on the playground during lunch recess. Maybe I’ll head down to the fishermans’ terminal. Maybe past that cedar-shingled house on North St. that always reminds me of my years in Berkeley. Or maybe west on Connecticut St. to see the bicycle nailed up in a tree, the one that’s kiddie-corner from the garden decorated with pieces of an old boiler that blew up....
Chances are I’ll collect a few leaves, a few acorns, a few pine cones along the way. And I’ll think about Mary Oliver, how she trained both her body and her soul to see the world. I’ll consider how the trees might help me fill with light.
Hope you have some trees to walk among, too.
—————————WHEN I AM AMONG THE TREES
by Mary Oliver
When I am among the trees,
especially the willows and the honey locust,
equally the beech, the oaks and the pines,
they give off such hints of gladness.
I would almost say that they save me, and daily.
I am so distant from the hope of myself,
in which I have goodness, and discernment,
and never hurry through the world
but walk slowly, and bow often.
Around me the trees stir in their leaves
and call out, “Stay awhile.”
The light flows from their branches.
And they call again, “It’s simple,” they say,
“and you too have come
into the world to do this, to go easy, to be filled
with light, and to shine.”
especially the willows and the honey locust,
equally the beech, the oaks and the pines,
they give off such hints of gladness.
I would almost say that they save me, and daily.
I am so distant from the hope of myself,
in which I have goodness, and discernment,
and never hurry through the world
but walk slowly, and bow often.
Around me the trees stir in their leaves
and call out, “Stay awhile.”
The light flows from their branches.
And they call again, “It’s simple,” they say,
“and you too have come
into the world to do this, to go easy, to be filled
with light, and to shine.”
Mary Oliver
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Today’s Poetry Friday host is Carol at Beyond LiteracyLink. Head over there to see what other people have posted.
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Today’s Poetry Friday host is Carol at Beyond LiteracyLink. Head over there to see what other people have posted.
Oh, I love this. Oliver's poetry is just so...renewing. Yes on details and concreteness! I don't know this one well at all, but I love it. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteMy son gave my daughter "The Hidden Life of Trees" for her birthday earlier this month. I haven't read it, but this poem seems like a nice foreword to it. "hints of gladness" is lovely, and "so distant from the hope of myself."
ReplyDeleteThey save me, and daily. Yes! I love thinking of you walking, Julie. xo
ReplyDeleteStay awhile is what I like to do in the autumn so I have time to commune with nature. I like how you started off your post with relating what a poem does best to Mary Oliver's poem.
ReplyDeleteIt's a lovely thing to hear about your walk, Julie, then to read Mary Oliver's contented words as well. I bought the home where I am now for location, of course, but mostly for a large very old cottonwood tree outside my door. It is a gift I see and open every day. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteOh, I love this...and trees. The emit such peace when I walk among them, and Oliver captures that. Right now I have a favorite tree to watch as I walk the dog as the sun sets behind it.
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful. I feel like this poem was written especially for me.
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